A song I wrote (Distortion)


#1

So this song is called Distortion
WARNING: EXPLICIT CONTENT
Leave your comments about how I can improve :smile:

Obliviate
You’re in my brain
You’re putting pressure on to my pain
Thought you would change
Now it’s too late
You’ve taken over my reign

Always wanna play but you bringing me down
Now that I am lost, love is nowhere to be found
Rendered nonexistent, weapons in your kisses
Messing up, fucking with my new sound

All you wanna be is
All that’s killing me
All you wanna see is
If I really bleed
All you wanna read are
The signs of pain from me
All you wanna be is

Distortion
Distortion

Reality
Infatuating
You, but you leave me nothing
Lightning striking
Powering me,
But still, it’s like I can do nothing

Always gonna fade cuz you bringing me down
Always screwing with my brain, spinning me around
Rendered to oblivion, razing with your kisses
Messing up, fucking with my new sound

All you wanna be is
All that’s killing me
All you wanna see is
If I really bleed
All you wanna read are
The signs of pain from me
All you wanna be is

Distortion
Distortion

Distortion, yeah, yeah
Distortion, yeah, yeah

Distortion

*note: the chorus (which is the part where it goes “distortion”, i was thinking with a background track of rock, metal or electric music

I’m open to criticisms so go ahead :stuck_out_tongue:


#2

I personally love them, so criticism isn’t something I can give… I can hear the song in my head and it flows with my emotions :sparkling_heart: thank ya for sharing!


#3

Hi JIA YI!!! OMG WHAT A PLEASANT SURPRISE!


#4

For a short song its got a furiousity to it straight to the point kinda feel

Not many of my short lyrics have that

I tip my hat to you


#5

@therealinfernojai that’s sick in a good way . :smile::grin: love it, love it​:heart: soon much talented people on here. I can’t even find my own talent.:confounded:


#6

@coolcat96 HAHAHAH as CMFT once said,

Everyone in this fucking room has a talent.


#7

I can actually sing this. This is soooo coooool!


#8

Man, I wish I could sing.