Alone (Working Title)


#1

So, this is a song that I have just finished and probably edited. Please, no hurtful comments. I am open to criticisms. Thank you!

  • Parental Advisory: Explicit content (but it is censored).

Where did they go?
Those memories,
The good and the bad.
Lost with the wind,
And I’m here alone.

Locked in my room,
With a cure in my hands.
Blood runs down,
My veins broken
And I couldn’t stop.

You haunt me down,
When I don’t wanna be found.
Give me love
Or just f*** off
And I would be glad.

Where did they go?
Those memories,
The good and the bad.
Lost with the wind,
And I’m here alone.

Where did you go?
The other you,
The one that I’d known.
But that is gone.
Again I’m here alone.

You said you loved,
When you really don’t.
You took my soul
And stained it black.
Now, it won’t go back.

Where did they go?
Those memories,
The good and the bad.
Lost with the wind,
And I’m here alone.

Where did you go?
The other you,
The one that I’d known.
But that is gone.
Again I’m here alone.

Stop acting like you own the world.
Stop acting like you can do whatever you want.
No means no, this you should know.
I can’t wait for the day when I say ‘F*** YOU!’

I’m here alone,
I’m here alone,
Trapped in darkness,
I’m here alone.

Where did they go?
Those memories,
The good and the bad.
Lost with the wind,
And I’m here alone.

Where did you go?
The other you,
The one that I’d known.
But that is gone.
No, I won’t be alone.

No, I won’t be alone.
No, I won’t be alone.
No, I won’t be alone.
No, I won’t be alone.
I’ll never be ALONE!

*Yeah, I know this song is pretty lame, hehe…
Shoutout to @acemasters who writes pretty good songs! :slight_smile:


#2

I actually sung this in my head

Pretty good actually

There is deffo something in this song


#3

Thanks! I didn’t know I was that good hehe. You write really songs too!


#4

I can feel the emotion… Amazing lyrics @evkorngdlpid they’re very inspiring :sparkling_heart:


#5

I loveee the lyrics you can feel the emotions in them :heart::heart: xD


#6

Omg HI!!! IT IS A PLEASESANT SURPRISE!! YOU JUST JOINED?!


#7

That was soon good

So much talented people on here I am just loving it.:blush::smile::grin::raised_hands: