Blending in the Atmosphere(poem)


#1

Drowning in this ocean of pain
that have become tears,
swimming in the seas
of the atmosphere

Burning from your fire,
freezing from a remembered
dream that has now come true

Long lost truths stuck
in clouded dark,
my soul to take as I
blend into you
sifting through the trash
to find your broken roses


#2

i like the first part
but the rest doesnt make much sense, at least, not to me then
its because the other parts, how you put those words and sentences together,
i cant really follow you
not trying to be rude or mean but just saying my opinion, thats all (: