Broken Mirror - NickGr


#1

Genre: nu-metal

Verse I:
So I fall again into the silence
Dropped myself into a self-to violence
Voice is creeping into my mind again
Saying this all will be in vain
Saying this is my fault and my pain
Saying I was the one who brought this down
I try to stop but I fall , can’t reach the ground
I bleed in my silent howl

Pre-chorus:
I shoot myself down
As I fall from the solid ground

Chorus 1:
There’s nothing left to run
(Your voice consumes me)
There’s no place for me to come
(Broken all my fantasies)
I try to think right but my doings are wrong

Verse II:
Another shot, another day
Mindless, walking into the streets of grey
There’s no choice
There’s no sun
There’s no way
I can’t imagine how i felt yesterday
When it was alright and I could hear you clear
Now It’s all ceasing and i feel no fear
But stepping off isn’t the right thing to do
As there’s no escape in the upcoming doom

Pre-chorus:
I shoot myself down
As I fall from the solid ground

Chorus 2:
There’s nothing left to run
(Your voice consumes me)
There’s no place for me to come
(Broken all my fantasies)
I’ve never ruined this shattering dome
I know this place I’ve thought i’d left behind
But there’s no way it lets my broken mind

Bridge:
As I can barely hear your voice
I’m brought down: have let myself no choice
I choke as I try to scream out to you
There’s no way for my soul to find it’s own dew

Chorus 2:
There’s nothing left to run
(Your voice consumes me)
There’s no place for me to come
(Broken all my fantasies)
I’ve never ruined this shattering dome
I know this place I’ve thought i’d left behind
But there’s no way it lets my broken mind

The Band:
@jabinquaken
@acemasters
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@yolo5494
@rickvanmeijel
@AJ_7
@theearlywalker
@Honey8
@NoireXJasper


#2

@framos1792
@lpfan61


#3

I love the chorus…
Brilliant work i bow before you and tip my hat


#4

Thank you. Really
*bows down in great gratitude
you’re too kind … :see_no_evil: :sweat_smile:


#5

I loved the bridge :smile:

Great job :slight_smile:


#6

Thanks :blush:


#7

This! :heart_eyes:

Thiiiisss!! :heart_eyes: :heart_eyes:

Awesome lyric!! :heart_eyes: I like it soooo much! Thanks for sharing! :blush:


#8

Omg you took my breath away i love this song u are truly amazing


#9

Verse ll is my favorite!!! :star_struck:
:smiley::smiley::smiley::smiley::tada: It is amazing @NickGr love it!! Great work! :clap::clap::writing_hand:


#10

Thanx for tagging me bro- my feedback comes soon :))) :sunny:


#11

@lpfan61 @Honey8 @hilaryfol
You girls are just overrating me… :joy::joy::see_no_evil: but seriously - thaaaaank you. Really!


#12

Not overrating… I like your way of writing lyrics…really… :blush: :smile:


#13

You really write well friend :blush:


#14

Good work Nick!

I agree with acemasters, the chorus is great!


#15

Thanx :blush:


#16

It has a very serious- maybe call it hopeless undertone- your new song- like being stuck in a trap- how so? :eyes: - from when are these lyrics above?
Two things about it: If you wrote these lines on purpose to create such a feel in the reader/listener then my biggest compliments- :tada:this works very great :clap:t2:
But
If you feel like this atm and if it’s an outflow to let it just go then this:
You are a great person, :blush:proud, talented in writing… and brave like not much ppl I know- I am proud to be your sis, bro- take this :hugs:


#17

Aye! :sunny: Yeah walker… I’ve got the same words! You explain so greatly :smiley:
Yep @NickGr we are proud to be your sisters!


#18

Awww
You’re melting me :see_no_evil: and @Honey8 too
:hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs:


#19

Yesterday. I usually don’t keep my lyrics unpublished for long. And a giant THANKS for caring


#20

That’s the opposite of me, I tend to sit a long time on my stuff before I release it :smile:
I always keep changing and improving things