Broken Shadows(song)


#1

Here is a song that isn’t quite finished yet…the lyrics are by me but the rest is by Mary Courage

What do you think?

Broken Shadows


#2

oh my god… this is so beautiful song :slight_smile: I want to hear it over and over again!


#3

I agree awsome song,great work. [smile][smile][heart]


#4

[quote]Sat, Jan 14, 2012 at 3:42 AM By: LinkinLayra

oh my god… this is so beautiful song :slight_smile: I want to hear it over and over again!
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Thank you both very much!


#5

ur voice is awesome :3 i like never speak :3


#6

[quote=intheend]ur voice is awesome :3 i like never speak :3
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ya Broken Shadows isn’t finished yet! her voice it amazing I think! ya I only wrote the lyrics!


#7

Very nice work!
I’m getting a big Evanescence vibe from this.
Don’t be afraid to work it and rework it over and over and try new things.
You two have a lot of talent here and can make this an amazing song when you’re done.

I’d love to hear a tempo change in the middle, and maybe some longer notes on the singing at the end when the emotion of the words is already hitting us the most.

I really really hope if you guys do another recording that you’ll post it here so we can all listen again!