Can’t Let It Go - NickGr


#1

Genre: nu-metal

Verse I:
I’ve cracked my wounds open again
Again and again putting venom in my veins
I am trapped, doomed to fight this till I’m insane
I don’t know if I live the other day
But I can’t tell if I should go on
Why do I fight myself? I’m loosing control
The world blurs and I feel lost all alone
How come that I’ve done this to me?
How come that I’ve locked me up and tossed the key ?
Will I ever be able to set this soul free?

Chorus:
(Why)
should I stand up and fight again ?
(Why)
should I be the one to numb the pain ?
(Why)
should I remember everything ?
And
(why)
can’t I let go of the past things ?

Verse II:
I stop as the memory of the other day flows on me
It’s so good to stay out of reality
But I know I can’t hide inside of the past
I wake up to get into all of this mess
It’s suffocating me, cracking me, tearing me apart
How can I ever find my own path?
And I walk out and there’s nothing I can see
But the ashes of time covering me
I stop fighting, I close my eyes and I fall
But the truth is that there’s no truth at all
And I wake up again in the circle of my own

Chorus:
(Why)
should I stand up and fight again ?
(Why)
should I be the one to numb the pain ?
(Why)
should I remember everything ?
And
(why)
can’t I let go of the past things ?

Bridge:
(Nowhere to go)
Can’t let it go, can’t set it free
(Nothing to see)
I’m in fault for my own misery
(Nothing to hear)
Crumbling into my insanity
(No air to breathe)
I give up now and let ashes cover me

Chorus:
(Why)
should I stand up and fight again ?
(Why)
should I be the one to numb the pain ?
(Why)
should I remember everything ?
And
(why)
can’t I let go of the past things ?
Even death won’t set me free

The Band
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@theearlywalker
@jabinquaken
@Honey8
@gatsie
@GioS
@rickvanmeijel
@yomarques
@the_termin8r


#2

Perfect description of a very familiar state of mind :grin:- your writing flow gets more and more fluent, bro :star_struck:- I heard the chorus- kinda ffdp style- like the slow ones from them- very great work bro :sunny::+1:t2: :tada:


#3

Wow! :heart_eyes: very well written! Like how you put chorus and bridge and the last line as a closure… :heart_eyes:


#4

I love it, Nick. Great job! :blush:


#5

I’m not worthy
tenor


#6

Great stuff! I can see your lyrics are really improving and it would make a good song


#7

One of my favorites by you! So well done! Beautifully written and well expressed


#8

You’re overreacting, Master
Thank you !
And thank you very much for your kind words @rickvanmeijel, @AJ_7(:hugs::hugs:) @theearlywalker(:hugs::hugs::hugs:) @lpfan61(:love_you_gesture::hugs::heart:️) @yomarques


#9

you got nice song lyrics there:heart_eyes:


#10

No way @NickGr this is far better then you realize, you have a way with words and the flow, it’s easy to read and must say that this masterful (excuse the pun!)


#11

Amazing work, Nick, it’s really relatable and well structured. Good job!


#12

Awweeessoooommmeeeee nick!! :sparkles::sparkles:
That’s really a nice song!! :smiley::wink: You wrote it so well! Perfect rhymes and words :+1:


#13

Guess who’s checking iiiiin :hugs:


#14

I know bro! :hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::sparkles::sparkles::sparkles::sparkles: