Empty- The Unity of Us


#17

I did say that with the title this song could go in either direction


#18

Yup. The first lines went dark, though.


#19

Do we want to re-write the song? I think there’s no issue if everyone is okay with it.


#20

Leave the transition of the song direction for now and let it take its route


#21

Guys, sorry – gotta do my lines tonight , things are a bit messy these days


#22

lol :scream: just saw the discussion in the other thread- that´s a bit messy too- anyway- I jump in with telling my opinion on this:

sending you a bonecrusher @NickGr :hugs: :hugs: :hugs: stay strong :muscle:


#23

Take your time Nick, never rush creativity :slight_smile:


#24

Nick? @NickGr?! I know you’re very busy- shall I take your turn for now? Sending strength and bonecrusher :muscle:t2::hugs:

Edit: @NickGr since I know about uni and all the stuff you have to do atm, I think it‘s ok to tag and remind you again. Or are you empty with lines?? :joy:

So, my idea is that, if you haven’t shown up - until Monday I gonna take your line and tag you then when my next line comes up- ok? Let it flow bro :joy:


#25

@NickGr???


#26

I will do the line if its not done by tomorrow!


#27

Verse1:

Caught in the chaos now
Trapped here and i wonder how
The space and time escape
Lost here in my disgrace
And I cry and I scream and I shout out loud
My noise lost in the echo goes unheard

Pre-Chorus:

Wandering in the empty of this dark
All that I built has fallen apart
But there’s a feeling built up in my heart

Chorus

One day, I know it for sure
Line 2: @framos1792
Line 3: Marilau
Line 4: NickGr ( that was originally my turn that I changed with Nicks)

Verse 2

Line 1: acemasters
Line 2: yomarques
Line 3: rickvanmeijel
Line 4: NickGr
Line 5: Ironsoldier16
Line 6: AJ_7

Pre-Chorus

Chorus

Bridge

Line 1: jabinquaken
Line 2: alz89
Line 3: acemasters

End Chorus (Depends on the main chorus, might need to change)
Line 1 of chorus
Line 2 of chorus

Ok I took Nicks line :stuck_out_tongue: and imo now in the chorus the song could change from dark to light…


#28

Oi I was gonna do it but got called into work lol


#29

Caught in the chaos now
Trapped here and i wonder how
The space and time escape
Lost here in my disgrace
And I cry and I scream and I shout out loud
My noise lost in the echo goes unheard

Pre-Chorus:

Wandering in the empty of this dark
All that I built has fallen apart
But there’s a feeling built up in my heart

Chorus

One day, I know it for sure
I’ll move beyond what I endure
Line 3: @Marilau
Line 4: NickGr ( that was originally my turn that I changed with Nicks)

Verse 2

Line 1: acemasters
Line 2: yomarques
Line 3: rickvanmeijel
Line 4: NickGr
Line 5: Ironsoldier16
Line 6: AJ_7

Pre-Chorus

Chorus

Bridge

Line 1: jabinquaken
Line 2: alz89
Line 3: acemasters

End Chorus (Depends on the main chorus, might need to change)
Line 1 of chorus
Line 2 of chorus

I apologize for the delay :grimacing:


#30

@Marilau


#31

@Marilau ( maybe you take her line now @acemasters? To keep it flowing? And first calling in advance @Dr.NickGr :joy: - ( ever considered to change your name here? Would fit perfectly :+1:t2: @NickGr


#32

Im at work today so if someone hasnt picked up the line i will do so after work


#33

Perfect :ok_hand:t2:


#34

If you don’t care, I’ll take her turn.

verse 1

Caught in the chaos now
Trapped here and i wonder how
The space and time escape
Lost here in my disgrace
And I cry and I scream and I shout out loud
My noise lost in the echo goes unheard

Pre-Chorus:

Wandering in the empty of this dark
All that I built has fallen apart
But there’s a feeling built up in my heart

Chorus

One day, I know it for sure
I’ll move beyond what I endure
Line 3: The emptiness is let behind
Line 4: @NickGr ( that was originally my turn that I changed with Nicks)

Verse 2

Line 1: acemasters
Line 2: yomarques
Line 3: rickvanmeijel
Line 4: NickGr
Line 5: Ironsoldier16
Line 6: AJ_7

Pre-Chorus

Chorus

Bridge

Line 1: jabinquaken
Line 2: alz89
Line 3: acemasters

End Chorus (Depends on the main chorus, might need to change)
Line 1 of chorus
Line 2 of chorus


#35

I love it when things become dynamic - well done bro @IronSoldier16


#36

I crashed the minute i got home lol