Falling Into My Agony - NickGr


#1

Genre: death-metal/hardcore

(screaming)

Chorus:
I’m falling into my agony
Death swallows me from the inside
Locked myself up in my fantasy
Running into my own lie

Verse I:
The world is broken in me
I can’t escape the silence
Once again I’m standing on my knees
Trying to escape the violence

Pre-chorus:
I’m locked up inside this cage and it just can’t be all the same
I’m screaming when I spill my blood in the name of vain

Chorus:
I’m falling into my agony
Death swallows me from the inside
Locked myself up in my fantasy
Running into my own lie

(screaming)
Into my own lie
Can’t see you!

Bridge:
I can barely hear you running , closing up yourself
And I just feel like choking and i cannot pretend
I’m slowly loosing you!

Chorus:
I’m falling into my agony
Death swallows me from the inside
Locked myself up in my fantasy
Running into my own lie
Falling into my own night!
I won’t make it to the light

(in a calm voice)
I won’t make it to the light

The Band:
@jabinquaken
@acemasters
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@yolo5494
@rickvanmeijel
@AJ_7
@theearlywalker
@Honey8
@NoireXJasper


#2

Good one Nick! I like this “screaming- calm” transition… at least I feel the part without said it, with a calmer sung… don’t know if I’m right…


#3

nice chorus


#4

This is so heavy @NickGr, yope you’re ok!


#5

Nice one. LET THE CREATIVITY FLOW!!
Sorry @rickvanmeijel for stealing your lines :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::sweat_smile:


#6

Thanks, I’m totally fine
A couple of days ago i was feeling… like I need to write this
Then a couple of corrections here and there and typing it here


#7

Copyright infringement! Alert the moderators!!


#8

Sorry i won’t…no copyrights… :no_mouth::no_mouth:


#9

Lol just kidding


#10

it`s the heaviest song from you that I´ve read so far… you make me feel your desperate souls’ share in these lyrics. This is great talent, to make the ppl feel your lyrics. I can say, I feel this way too sometimes, but I learned this: I can make these voices, telling me “I will never reach the light” shut up! It´s in my power to just step back, breath in and get in this mode: Ok, once again… :muscle:…and this helps me to just move on. And refering to the last line of your lyrics: You are already in, :sunny: this my feedback :wink:


#11

I do this too, it’s the only way. :sun_with_face: :sunflower:


#12

lol i was just being kid

thats right @theearlywalker and @mishelka3 , i agree with you :slight_smile:


#13

Sometimes I need to scream it out to let it go… that’s how some heavy lyrics are made


#14

Let it goooo -


#15

The Catalyst? :stuck_out_tongue:
Shouldn’t it be Iridescent?


#16

It’s heavy dark moods and lyrics. A bit opressive.


#17

Is there the slightest chance to get out of the darkness ? Beautiful poetry! I really like…