Hear Me Now (Working Title) - t.r.i.j


#1

Hey guys so I wrote this song/rap thing 2 days ago. It’s basically a song about my experience with life so far. The second verse I wrote because I was so upset that I couldn’t win the M&G competition for the Fifth Harmony concert and I was kinda mad at myself lol. Anyways, comments are always appreciated :DD

Hear me now, hear me now
As I’m screaming out in the lonely night
Hear me now, hear me now
As I fear that I am losing sight
Of who I dream to be
Creating symphonies

Look
I’ve spent my life only making mistakes
Always choosing wrong, spent my life with hate
I’ve spent my time, I’ve been tryna paint
A new picture without all the taints
I’m the beast that can’t be tamed
But somehow I lost the reign
My world is in disorder
And my heart is now in pain
Been tryna restore my faith
I hope it works one day

Hear me now, hear me now
As I’m screaming out in the lonely night
Hear me now, hear me now
As I fear that I am losing sight
Of who I dream to be
Creating symphonies

Hear me now, hear me now
As I break myself tryna make things right
Hear me now, hear me now
As I drown myself in the tears I cry
The truth of what I feel
I’ll change my destiny

An obsession with passion becomes a competition
Rev, ignition in session, wanna get in possession
But if we question ourselves, why we keep forcing ourselves
I’m not saying that it’s wrong but why do we pressure ourselves?
I mean it’s like we doing it way too hard
We pushing ourselves just way too far
Will we get hurt, will we break down?
Will we get burned? Only time will tell
I know this feeling cuz I’m feeling it now
Opportunity lost, I keep feeling so down
So I hope that you won’t hurt yourself
The way I did, just let it go

Hear me now, hear me now
As I’m screaming out in the lonely night
Hear me now, hear me now
As I fear that I am losing sight
Of who I dream to be
Creating symphonies

Hear me now, hear me now
As I break myself tryna make things right
Hear me now, hear me now
As I drown myself in the tears I cry
The truth of what I feel
I’ll change my destiny

I’m human, yeah
My heartbeat stumbles
And my backbone crumbles
I’m human, yeah
Everywhere I go
I end up alone
I need to change the way I think
The way I work, the way I link
My path it may, may not be straight
But I’ll design it my own way

Hear me now, hear me now
As I’m screaming out in the lonely night
Hear me now, hear me now
As I fear that I am losing sight
Of who I dream to be
Creating symphonies

Hear me now, hear me now
As I break myself tryna make things right
Hear me now, hear me now
Cuz I won’t go down without a fight
The truth of what I feel
I’ll finally make it real


#2

*standing ovation

MY FRIEND! YOU SONGWRTINING MASTER! Don’t say no again lol.


#3

Wow that was a great song! :slight_smile:


#4

WOW that was good!