Invisible or Invincible (Working Title)


#1

Hey guys. This is a new song that I have finished probably a week ago. This is inspired by Saint Asonia’s (omg these guys are awesome asf) ‘Trying To Catch Up With The World’. Thank you! Constructive comments only please! :slight_smile:

[Verse 1]
Sometimes his heart feels heavy
With so much to carry
He’s got a war in his head
Even when he’s laying down on his bed

‘Cause they said ‘Boys don’t cry’
But he did, no matter how hard he tried
His mind held so many thoughts
Every day, so hard he fought

He doesn’t know, oh
He doesn’t know

[Verse 2]
She’s got a lot of secrets,
Got so many regrets
So little truths, yet so many lies
Just to mask her own inside

‘Cause they said ‘You’re fine’
Judging only by her fake smile
Her mind held so many thoughts
Every day, so hard she fought

She doesn’t know, oh
She doesn’t know

[Pre-chorus]
Both thought they had no choice
Both thought they had no voice
Both couldn’t call their house a home
Both thought they would die alone

[Chorus]
But they were blinded by pain
They thought their efforts were in vain
They didn’t know they’re no longer invisible
I know they’re invincible
Come o’er here, I’ll help
In pain, you don’t have to yell
You’re no longer invisible
Baby, you’re invincible

[Verse 3]
She walked ever so slowly home
Hoping she’d be alone
Just for once, she prayed
That she could fade away

Her prayers were not answered
She became so angered
Her feelings went all loose
As she put her head through the noose

She doesn’t know, oh
She doesn’t know

[Verse 4]

He took in all the pills
All against his own will
His pals said it would make him feel good
But all he felt was sour mood

He looked at all the scars
And looked towards the stars
All he felt was rage
As he held the silver blade

He doesn’t know, oh
He doesn’t know

[Pre-chorus]
Both thought they had no choice
Both thought they had no voice
Both couldn’t call their house a home
Both thought they would die alone

[Chorus]
But they were blinded by pain
They thought their efforts were in vain
They didn’t know they’re no longer invisible
I know they’re invincible
Come o’er here, I’ll help
In pain, you don’t have to yell
You’re no longer invisible
Baby, you’re invincible

[Bridge]
Take my hand
And see the world
Understand and
See the secrets unfold

[Pre-chorus]
Both had thought wrong for so long
They had been wrong for too long
Wishing they had a friend
Wishing they had an end

[Chorus]
But they’ll no longer be blinded by pain
Their efforts will no longer be in vain
They’ll know they’re no longer invisible
They’ll know they’re invincible
They don’t need help anymore
They have to yelp no more
‘Cause they’re no longer invisible
They’re invincible

They’ve pulled through
And saw through
All the lies
And up they rise
Darling, you have a choice
Between invisible or invincible


#2

Good writing skills that was awesome work