Say My Last Goodbye - NickGr


#1

Genre: metal

Verse I:
I’ve started this so long ago
I don’t remember why
Was I ever not alone?
And why I have to fight?

Chorus:
Left behind everything
All I’ve done in vain
Haven’t left anything
Anything but pain
Anything but lies
I’m here to say my last goodbye

Say my last goodbye

Verse II:
Standing in the desert
Staring in the dark
Is there such a resort
Where I can heal my scars?
Can I be forgiven now
For all the sins I’ve done?
Can I finally find my heart
And go on without a doubt?

Chorus:
Left behind everything
All I’ve done in vain
Haven’t left anything
Anything but pain
Anything but lies
I’m here to say my last goodbye

Say my last GOODBYE

Bridge:
There’s nothing left but rage
I’m crawling in my own demise
Will I ever change?
I just want to apologise
And finally say my last
Goodbye

Chorus:
Left behind everything
All I’ve done in vain
Haven’t left anything
Anything but pain
Anything but lies
I’m here to say my last goodbye

Say my last goodbye

The Band:
@jabinquaken
@the_termin8r
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@acemasters
@NoireXJasper
@Honey8
@framos1792
@theearlywalker


#2

^^^^^

@lpfan61
@yolo5494


#3

I really like it this every I would want in a song


#4

Thank you very much, but… can you pls rephrase ? I don’t get it :sweat_smile:


#5

I a songwriter and you have everything thing that you need to make a great song so I am trying to say this really really good


#6

Ah! Thank you very much :blush:


#7

That’s rocking! Yay! :metal: :tada: “breaking the habit tonight” :notes: I’m thinking about that music with your lyric… :notes: :smile:


#8

This is one of your best songs ever.


#9

Sounds great


#10

Lol, must laugh, :joy: you as one of our first songwriters here getting such a feedback from a freshman :laughing:- but yeah, maybe because you haven’t summarized them in an own topic until now

the lyrics are great and compact, feels like the song has grown slowly, it describes a well known feel to me in a way, that I can feel every line,:notes: masterpiece :tada: @NickGr, and happy :grinning: to find it after this long while! :rainbow::sunny:

Very great share, thanx :blush: :hugs:


#11

You rock !! @NickGr


#12

Thanx @Belinha, @annejprado, @hilaryfol - you’re just too kind
Thank you sisters @lpfan61 and @theearlywalker - :hugs::hugs::hugs:

I was actually thinking about that - and you mentioned it too. Thinking the same way - again :hugs:


#13

@NickGr Give yourself more credit. It’s really good. Where you say go on without a doubt? Could be And make a new start? Good Job Really like it.:heart:


#14

Well done amigo! :clap::clap:


#15

This is my favourite


#16

Loved these lines!!! Bro you are doing soo great!! :smiley::smiley::smiley: That’s awesome one! Keep writing! :clap: