Silent Scream - NickGr


#1

Genre: rock/alternative

Verse I:
Silence is my own choice
No one can wake me from this nightmare
Consuming memory of your voice
I don’t want to wage the warfare

Pre-chorus:
I’m trying to open my eyes and pretend
That all of these wounds can be mended again

Chorus:
Screaming all alone
(I’m in fault for this nightmare)
Myself is the man I don’t own
(And nothing can be done: I’m aware)
Can I escape this grave of my own?

Verse II:
Locked myself under this dome
Trying to breathe out
Should I leave it and be alone?
Or should I stand up and fight now?

Pre-chorus:
I’m trying to open my eyes and pretend
That all of these wounds can be mended again

Chorus II:
Screaming all alone
(I’m in fault for this nightmare)
Myself is the man I don’t own
(And nothing can be done: I’m aware)
Can I escape this grave of my own?
Can I escape from the shattering hole?
Wake me up from this nightmare

Bridge:
Now I have no choice
The cold is dragging me down
Choking on my mute voice
And I’ve got no way out

Chorus II:
Screaming all alone
(I’m in fault for this nightmare)
Myself is the man I don’t own
(And nothing can be done: I’m aware)
Can I escape this grave of my own?
Can I escape from the shattering hole?
Wake me up from this nightmare

The Band:
@acemasters
@theearlywalker
@the_termin8r
@Honey8
@jabinquaken
@gatsie
@AJ_7
@NoireXJasper
@yolo5494
@rickvanmeijel


#2

Great chorus Nick, feels like hearing them singing it- two diffrent voices- like Mike and Chaz… - the lyrics are like a rythm theirself :sunny:️:grinning:, great flow bro :+1:t2:


#3

Lovely…
I am actually planning something… For tht searching for everyone’s strength and interest… I am confused what should I put yours… Lyric writing, or video making… lol


#4

Thaaaanks :hugs:


#5

Well done!!!


#6

The title used to be one of my old screen name. How strange.


#7

Love it

I think the last line in the final chorus should be

I’m in fault for this nightmare

But thats just me

Overall i think the song is banging :slight_smile:


#8

Thanks :slight_smile:
Hmm… actually, a good idea!)))


#9

Niiiiiiiceeee :clap:


#10

Great feedback Ace @acemasters :grinning: