Songs by Stephanie @StephLP18

#225

I am sure many of the peeps would like that! It’s all about the technique really, vocalizing it in your mind how you want it to sound. Let’s take for example a snippet of a song I wrote below, took a while for me to figure it out, but I think it will work. Though this is still a work in progress :stuck_out_tongue:

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#226

Have been busy lately with my final year of high school

But I should be able to post a song I did here shortly

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#227

V1
I am just st a girl form Ohio
Always looking to tomorrow
Now I am here on the stage
Singing out my rage
Pre C
Am up here taking a risk
Shaking form my foot to my wrist
But I have clutched into a fist
C
I have been told what to do for far to long
So now I am here singing this song
The words I sing are pure
With music being my only cure
V2
Now I push my self though
So I can show what I do
I ran away form fear with a blink of an eye
And let go all the way to the sky
Bridge
I take words and make them art
And using music to bring me out the dark

Sorry for the wait

And I personally think this is one of my weaker songs I have written

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#228

It’s a rap song! :thinking: well…yeah, not my favourite between yours,but keep going!! :muscle: :hugs:

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#229

Right…

Firstly wow, you have a great passion for lyric writing
Just keep writing, even if you think it is rubbish, keep it. Use that as fuel

What i would say do what i do, write a bunch of songs and post them in drop down menus making it easier

And have two topics one for unfinished stuff and one for finished stuff

But as for the actual song writing you have some great stuff

On the subject of song writing, looking at your mums poem and your version its like two people writing something to each other its pretty good how they kinda go hand in hand, i wouldnt say one is better then the other, i would say the co-exsist side by side

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#230

Thanks for your words. @acemasters

And I am going to up a new thread for my unfinished stuff shortly

So thanks for that suggestion

And maybe one some time me and you could work on a song together

And my passion comes from me wanting a career in music and linkin park and Chris Cornell were my biggest impersonation for music

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#231

It is short and simple but I feel it can go on longer. What I myself do when songwriting, if I get some verse ideas ANYWHERE, I’ll jot them down right there and then.

Then once I have a collection of 6 or more, I tend to either continue from there or, see if it coexists (or makes sense) with something else written on that “idea wall”. A song I wrote was pretty much just all just jot-downs.

Have you tried doing different types of rhyming patterns? I think experimenting with this and style the rhyme is done helps also.

Just keep your head at it and I’m sure you can achieve anything you want in this life. Will it and strive for it, you have great potential :slight_smile:

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#232

Thanks for your words. @Woco21

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#233

I would concider it an honour

I will let you direct the direct etc so just email me when you want acemasters84@gmail.com

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#234

V1.

Walking on a double edge sword
My voice tied with a cord
This life I can’t afford
With the lies I hoard

Chours

Now as the years fly
The hope is running dry
Looking for a way to fly
Because all I see is flying bullets
I have to fight for myself
Because it’s me against myself
No one to hold my hand
Life buried beneath the sand

V2.

I try to see a fantasy
Because I can’t deal with reality
Its driving me insane
Like finding a rainbow in the rain

Chours

Now as the years fly
The hope is running dry
Looking for a way to fly
Because all I see is flying bullets
I have to fight for myself
Because it’s me against myself
No one to hold my hand
Life buried beneath the sand

Bridge

Cause everything i thouch
Turns into a speck of dust

Chours

Now as the years fly
The hope is running dry
Looking for a way to fly
Because all I see is flying bullets
I have to fight for myself
Because it’s me against myself
No one to hold my hand
Life buried beneath the sand

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#235

:raising_hand_woman: me! :hugs: :hugs:

Nice lyric! :smile:

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#236

Thanks. @lpfan61

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#237

Shell in my back

V1.
Stuck inside a lucid dream
Thoughts tearing at the seems
Death running through my head
My heart stabbed with a theard
Looking for a way out
But i am still facing doubt

chorus

Trying to it make clear
But voices is all you hear
The angel and devil in your mind
Fighting all the fucking time
Times you want to give in
Because there is nothing to win
Shell in my back
Awaiting the attack

V2.
About to take the jump
Cause no one gives a fuck
I have unhealable wounds
My end is coming soon

chorus

Trying to it make clear
But voices is all you hear
The angel and devil in your mind
Fighting all the fucking time
Times you want to give in
Because there is nothing to win
Shell in my back
Awaiting the attack

Bridge
Crucifying agony
Disturbing stainty

chorus

Trying to it make clear
But voices is all you hear
The angel and devil in your mind
Fighting all the fucking time
Times you want to give in
Because there is nothing to win
Shell in my back
Awaiting the attack

V3.

there was no warning or sign
demons at me all the time
My life in jeopardy
So burn the memory

chorus

Trying to it make clear
But voices is all you hear
The angel and devil in your mind
Fighting all the fucking time
Times you want to give in
Because there is nothing to win
Shell in my back
Awaiting the attack

V4.
All the wrong
is now gone

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#238

Well written! I really like the way you end the chorus with these lines

I’d call this song Shell In My Back :grin:

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#239

I like that name

Thank you. @rickvanmeijel

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#240

The past you can’t change

But the future is your control

The days will range

You have to keep yourself whole

There will be times you will fall

But you have to get up

Even if it’s just a crawl

See a half full cup

Put one foot in front

Let that one lead

Go for the crazy stint

Because this what you need

Fuck everyone else in the room

Take that leap of faith

You will defeat this doom

You have the strength to win the race

You may just be at the start

But you must look ahead

Because you got in your heart

You will eventually hit the red

You may face a crack

But you have keep pushing through

Overcome the setbacks

Because this 100 percent you

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#241

Strong song this time! :hushed: nicely written! :hugs: :hugs:

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#242

Hello all. I think all the songs are great . I can relate to some things in them myself You do a very good job in my eyes @ STEPHLP18 Thank you for continuing to share them :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

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#243
                      Start again 

V1.

I am not feeding into the addiction
Or there self infliction
There’s a storm brewing
And a tale of undoing

Chorus.

Now I am standing tall
Not going to let this get to me at all
I am taking a risk
With decision being brisk
Now my life is taking a change
So I will no longer be in chains

V2.

Years I was a walking shadow
With tons of unwanted cargo
Now that you’re crossing a line
The time has come to refine

Chours.

Now I am standing tall
Not going to let this get to me at all
I am taking a risk
With decision being brisk
Now my life is taking a change
So I will no longer be in chains

V3.

Let go of pain
Or live in vain
Now that you have arrived
Your life is really for a revise

chours.

Now I am standing tall
Not going to let this get to me at all
I am taking a risk
With decision being brisk
Now my life is taking a change
So I will no longer be in chains

V4.

I am ready to feel
Love that’s real

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#244

Great song! What are you gonna call it?

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