The Unity Of Us: Demons in my head


#21

There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to bet (@Honey8 are you sure you mean ‘bet’ and not ‘be’?)

For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
@NoireXJasper
GioS
Acemasters
yomarques
rickvanmejel
AJ_7
NickGr
theearlywalker

melodic bridge slow (1 line )
theearlywalker
GioS
acemasters

3.Verse (2 lines)
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8


#22

I am soo sorry thats ‘be’!!
I’ll edit it again…

{Verse 1}
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

{Verse 2}
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

{Slow melodic bridge}
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

{Chorus (1 line)}
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
@NoireXJasper
GioS
Acemasters
yomarques
rickvanmejel
AJ_7
NickGr
theearlywalker

{melodic bridge slow (1 line )}
theearlywalker
GioS
acemasters

{3.Verse (2 lines)}
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8
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#23

{Verse 1}
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

{Verse 2}
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

{Slow melodic bridge}
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

{Chorus (1 line)}
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
@GioS
Acemasters
yomarques
rickvanmejel
AJ_7
NickGr
theearlywalker

{melodic bridge slow (1 line )}
theearlywalker
GioS
acemasters

{3.Verse (2 lines)}
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8


#24

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow melodic bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
@acemasters
yomarques
rickvanmejel
AJ_7
NickGr
theearlywalker

melodic bridge slow (1 line )
theearlywalker
GioS
acemasters

3.Verse (2 lines)
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8


#25

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow melodic bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
@yomarques
rickvanmejel
AJ_7
NickGr
theearlywalker

melodic bridge slow (1 line )
theearlywalker
GioS
acemasters

3.Verse (2 lines)
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8


#26

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
@rickvanmeijel
AJ_7
NickGr
theearlywalker

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
theearlywalker
GioS
acemasters

Verse 3 (2 lines)
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8


#27

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
@AJ_7
NickGr
theearlywalker

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
theearlywalker
GioS
acemasters

Verse 3 (2 lines)
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8


#28

What a wonderful song form all of you i love it so much.


#29

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
@NickGr
theearlywalker

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
theearlywalker
GioS
acemasters
Verse 3 (2 lines)
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8


#30

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
@theearlywalker
GioS
acemasters
Verse 3 (2 lines)
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8


#31

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety
I tear it down and set me free

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
no longer hiding in my pain
@GioS
acemasters

Verse 3 (2 lines)
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8


#32

Awww @theearlywalker your lines are amazing !


#33

I’ll post my line later today, sorry for the delay, guys.


#34

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety
I tear it down and set me free

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
no longer hiding in my pain
the darkest days now fall behind
@acemasters

Verse 3 (2 lines)
Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8


#35

@theearlywalker is the chorus abit long?

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety
I tear it down and set me free

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
No longer hiding in my pain
The darkest days now fall behind
The light is there in front of me

Verse 3 (2 lines)
@Gatsie
jabinquaken
Honey8


#36

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety
I tear it down and set me free

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
No longer hiding in my pain
The darkest days now fall behind
The light is there in front of me

Verse 3 (2 lines)
Thoughts are haunting
I have no song left to sing
@jabinquaken
Honey8


#37

Verse 1
There’s something moving in my mind
Seems not clearly then I go blind
There’s something dark and deep
It always shows itself before I sleep
I don’t know how long can I pretend
But I recognize that voice inside of my head

Verse 2
It says that I’m dead
Is it really just in my head?
Stop right here, this can’t be real
This isn’t how I’m supposed to feel
It’s dark, and cold, it’s like a knife
The voice that tries to end my life

Slow Melodic Bridge
In deafening whispers they scream at me
Are these voices just in my head
Oh my god they are driving me mad

Chorus (1 line)
And I can’t hear, nor I can’t see
What you want me to pretend to be
For this facade will be no more
It’s time to close the door
And now I can’t hear any noise
There are no options left to choice
It’s clear what I gotta do
Accept it like it wants me to
Embrace the chaos that surrounds me
Until there’s nothing left to see
And I let it consume me
Bleeding in my broken reality
There’s nothing left to feel but guilt and anxiety
I tear it down and set me free

Melodic Bridge Slow (1 line)
No longer hiding in my pain
The darkest days now fall behind
The light is there in front of me

Verse 3 (2 lines)
Thoughts are haunting
I have no song left to sing
No voice, no choice and shattered wings
@Honey8

I don’t get it. What is this song about?


#38

Tbh… neither me… just keep on writing!

I’ll do my lines tonight :slightly_smiling_face:


#39

I should be about demons in your head right? Perhaps we strayed too far from the original idea lol.

Exactly, just let your thoughts flow and we’ll see whatever we end up with


#40

Nice song :ok_hand:t4:. I wrote a song few years ago that has the exact same title :joy: