The Unity of us: Unite and take over!


#1

Heey Soldiers,

thanx for nominating my song!

First of all: this is the first thread that I set up after my returning into your middle. I will never forget the moment (goose bumps while writing these lines) on the 21.07. when the first thing on radio was the news about the incident… it felt like falling - instinctively I logged into forums - cause it was clear that only inhere I have a chance to resist…

A moment later I got. a pm from Rob. It touched my heart and made me nearly cry that he and the other soldiers were caring for me- after my leaving was real rude. Rob readded me to our family WA group and I was a lil bit afraight and happy same time- this was exactly what I needed in this moment. You guys welcomed me with your arms so wide open and it felt like being one with each of you in this moment, a great experience of being united…

And it got on, the next days I made the experience how supportive and heartly and lovely you forum soldiers are, this feel of being a part of this big thing made me strong and proud- this is the spirit of Chester, we would have made him sooo proud. To me it was the only place I could be without feeling just the despair and sadness but understanding, consolation and love and my soulmate and I shared light… this alltogether is just healing.

This experience was grand and formative to me and the idea of my song is expressing this feeling- how powerful we are UNITED …

Lol - long introduction- I tend to be extravagant when it comes to emotions- but I like to make you feel this songs spirit with this words and now we start our new project:

Unite and take over

Verse 1 and 2: Rap-style

1 verse (2 lines each)
NickGr
acemasters

2 verse (1 or 2 lines each)
augusdbianco
Honey8
gioS

first biuld up (melodic sing) 1 line each
Gatsie
AJ_7
yomarques

Chorus (1 or 2 lines- powerful)
jabinquaken
rckvanmeijel
NoireXJasper

verse 3 (one line)
yomarques
nickGr
agusbianco
honey8
acemasters
gioS

instrumental - giutar + drums

bridge and build up (one line each)
noireXjaspery
rickvanmeijel
yomarques

final chorus (one line each)
jabinquaken
AJ_7
acemasters
NickGr

outro 2 lines
Gatsie

and now: let it flow guys, express the unity of us

the band:
@NickGr ( sorry - somehow you got lost on the tag list- sorry bro- lol incridible- :sweat_smile:… yours is the start :ok_hand::upside_down_face::hugs:
@acemasters
@gatsie
@jabinquaken
@AJ_7
@rickvanmeijel
@the_termin8r
@yomarques ( hey friend, nice to find you in the band :slight_smile: )
@Honey8
@NoireXJasper


#2

@GioS
@agusdbianco

read post above…
:sunny:


#3

Ummm… Have I missed something?


#4

It was the day after C died- you readded me and we talked before it, remember?! :blush:@the_termin8r


#5

@the_termin8r can you verify this?


#6

Oh @the_termin8r really?!. That so good that you brought walker here. :smiley: Thnx bro.

Well @theearlywalker its great to have you… Thnx for coming back! :blush:


#7

:hugs: thanx my friend- thanx for welcoming me this heartly @Honey8


#8

Glad to have you back :hugs:


#9

I’m so glad to finally have you back in here. Wish the reason was different but still :hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs:
So… let’s roll:

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
@acemasters


#10

Nice description! Gives me a clearer vision of what I should write


#11

I’d say it should be something like classic LP or maybe even HU style with melodic build-up and choruses
But you’d better ask @theearlywalker)

Not to blame you @theearlywalker but Ace might be angry as he loves everything max cleaned , tidy and boring lol


#12

Hey guys, because I’m new around here I don’t really understand how this works so how is it?
Like, do you guys write lines on the subject that @theearlywalker described before and then I have to add a line that I think will sound good with the other ones? Do I have to comment on the lines that are already written? Or how is it?


#13

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse 2:
@agusdbianco remember to tag the next person and add all previous lines


#14

well yeah, but I meant to say that @theearlywalker 's story will probably inspire my lines.


#15

you can come up with anything you like, it doesn’t have to link to the subject introduction. Be sure though that your lines fit with the previously written lines by others. Otherwise the song will end up messy :smile:


#16

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse 2:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
@Honey8


#17

Do you guys know that Mike has bought our merch using some time machines?


#18

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse 2:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade
And each one always made me feel eviscerate
@GioS


#19

(Must avoid discussion here. :see_no_evil:)


#20

Verse I:
Lie the hell down, it’s your judgement day!
I’m rocking onto my own way
I’m with my homies you better move over
As we unite and take over

Verse 2:
You brought me down so many times
And I will take you down this time
Those pains and hurts cut deeper than blade
And each one always made me feel eviscerate
But mess with me, and you mess with all
Cause we crashed, we burned and now we stand tall

first biuld up (melodic sing)
@gatsie