Unfinished stuff by StephLP18


#1

I am creating this topic after ace suggested that if you have some lyrics but don’t have a song you should still share it
And then I can get ideas form other people here

So thank you once again. @acemasters


#2

Taking minute by minute
Is how I life it
To many times I dwell in the past
And I keep my eyes just looking though the glass

Just come up with this a few days ago
But don’t what to do next


#3

Taking minute by minute
Is how I live it
To many times I dwell in the past
And I keep my eyes just looking though the glass

Step by step I walk my path
This is how my journey is
So many roads I have walked down
And I keep my options open when looking around

Hows that?!?
@StephLP18


#4

I really like that. Ace

Thanks for your help


#5

V1

I have found a flame in me and its ready to untite
So you better hold on real tight
Because something is going to burn
Because now its my turn

Pre chorus

Time I stand up and take my throne
So you can hear me all the way to Rome

Chorus

I was the one that was looked at with a frown
But now I am. The one with the crown
I was the ghost no one could ever see
Now I have everyone bowing at my knees
I had people caqued at my thoart
Now I walk the tin line across the rope

V2

I walk straight though the door
I see the heart I abhor
And others fall to the floor
But I will never fill that tore

Pre Chorus and Chorus

Bridge

I am the one with the blade
Trying to prevent another crusade

Pre chorus and Chorus

Bridge 2

Even though I have the king and kingdom
I still lack the freedom

Pre chorus

Still working on this
That’s why I posted it here and not my other thread


#6

Paragraph it so it doesn’t look like on continuious verse


#7

Just did.


#8

Bullets flying in the air
We you just watch and stare
See broken bones and blood
And hope lost in the mud
You try not to hear to gun
Or the people on the run
You try to imagine a fantasy
Because you can’t appect reality
Slowly going inside
Having yourself to blame
For the life you wasted
And the guilt you tasted
And everything you touch
Turns into a speck of dust


#9

petrified hell,
locked in a cell
Never ending thoughts
come at a cost
But i am not willing to pay
i will be going all the way
Not going to let this define me
because it’s freedom i decree
Freedom from my mind
because it is unrefined
What’s inside is hazy
my mind so crazy
Millions of unanswered questions
thoughts of aggression
I won’t let another piece be corrupted
because i am about to erupt
I descended from a fall
but i am slowly learning to crawl
Picking up my feet once again
starting to amend
The lies that were told
left me so cold
I will no longer be deprived
i have survived
People saying i would never be
because i was a nobody
But just look at me now
i have meet it somehow
I am slowly making it
and i am not going to quit


#10

i have written this and i think this is good

but i don’t know how i want this to be done though

any help is more then welcomed


#11

I think you mean petrified. :stuck_out_tongue:


#12

yeah that’s what i meant

thanks Rob


#13

May I take this and look at in better and maybe add it possibly

I need a new project


#14

Go ahead ace
I am looking foreword to it


#15

Ive broken the song up and from what I can see all it needs is a chorus


#16

Petrified hell,
Locked in a cell
Never ending thoughts
Come at a cost
But i am not willing to pay
I will be going all the way
Not going to let this define me
Because it’s freedom I decree
Freedom from my mind
Because it is unrefined

I JUST WANT TO BREAKAWAY
BREAKAWAY FROM THIS IMPRISIONMENT

What’s inside is hazy
My mind so crazy
Millions of unanswered questions
Thoughts of aggression
I won’t let another piece be corrupted
Because i am about to erupt
I descended from a fall
But i am slowly learning to crawl

I JUST WANT TO ESCAPE!
ESCAPE FROM THIS INJUSTICE INSIDE!
I NEED TO BREAKAWAY!
BREAKAWAY FROM THIS IMPRISIONMENT!

Picking up my feet once again
Starting to amend
The lies that were told
Left me so cold

I will no longer be deprived
I have survived
People saying i would never be
Because i was a nobody
But just look at me now
I have meet it somehow
I am slowly making it
and i am not going to quit

I want to breakaway
Breakaway from this imprisionment
I just want to fade again
Fade again into this self sense of hope
I JUST WANT TO ESCAPE
ESCAPE FROM THIS INJUSTICE INSIDE
I NEED TO BREAKAWAY
BREAKAWAY FROM THIS IMPRISIONMENT


#17

That’s a nice collaboration! :heart_eyes:


#18

This really good
Thanks for helping me out on this. @acemasters


#19

Well ive been drawing a blank recently not really had much to do, not started any new projects lately, so when I saw you needed help was like

Me me me me me me me me me me me, I can help lol
Maybe you could also help me out

Got to my complete works topic for full details


#20

It would be an honor to help you