Untold Story - Ace Masters


#1

Fresh off the presses, I actually finished this moments before this post making this another LP Forum exclusive
This is Untold Story

Can you see me begging for survival?
I just want to make it through the night
Why do you look down at me?
Judging me like you’re better than me
How about learning what led me here?
My untold story that you can’t see
Am I asking you to feel sorry for me?
No, I just want to understand

Sometimes in life, things happen to us
This is out of our control

If you see me looking so grim
It’s because I’ve hit rock bottom
Do I see a way out of here?
Maybe an untold story is waiting for me.

Do you see me as you walk by?
Secretly thinking that I should get a job
Why don’t you then employ me?
Because you would never have someone like me work for you
You throw in a penny, yeh I am greatful
But don’t pitty me, don’t feel obligated
Because you lot looking down at me makes me feel a little aggravated
I don’t need your judgement, you don’t know me
You don’t know my untold story

Sometimes in life, things happen to us
This is out of our control

If you see me looking so grim
It’s because I’ve hit rock bottom
Do I see a way out of here?
Maybe an untold story is waiting for me.

It hasn’t been easy but I have accepted the fact
That there is now no turning back
I have to make do with the cards I have been dealt
And I all I ask is for a little help

Sometimes in life, things happen to us
This is out of our control

If you see me looking so grim
It’s because I’ve hit rock bottom
Do I see a way out of here?
Maybe an untold story is waiting for me.

It’s ready
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#2

@Honey8
A fresh one to sink your teeth into


#3

@acemasters I feel like I should point out that I read you lyrics every time and they’re awesome, I just don’t comment on them because I’ll end up saying the same thing every time. Keep the awesomeness going. :thumbsup:


#4

Its all gravy
A like to indicate you have read it and liked it is enough :slight_smile:
But any criticle feedback is also greatly recieved
Its the way i improve my lyrics

Back to this song

It’s kinda from the homelessness side of things and sometimes how they are judged and how sometimes there is an untold story for how it happened


#5

i just loved this song!! thnx for tagging me…
its literally so good. You are a very good writer
i agree with @the_termin8r we dont comment for just saying…we comment cause lyrics are amazing!!
keep going…doin amazing work of inspiring!!
:smile:


#6

“I want to comment in emoji”

:clap: :+1:


#7

:ok_hand::metal:🖎:medal_military::trophy::video_game::joystick::musical_keyboard::saxophone::guitar::notes::musical_note:


#8

LOVING IT :ok_hand:


#9

i really like that i could relate to it alot great job here :slight_smile: