When you're gone - by Anna


#1

(Verse 1)
I am so lost
Inside my mind
What does it cost
To win this fight

(Pre-chorus)
I’ve given up and let my memories fade away
‘Cause you’ve just gone and left me with nothing else to say

(Chorus)
Why is it so hard
to live a life like this?
Forgetting the past,
the days that feel like years
You were the light that brought me to top
But now you are gone and my life just stopped…

(Verse 2)
Jump in the lake
Of my bitter tears
What does it take
To get rid of fear

(Pre-chorus)
I’m feeling like nobody else should have ever felt
Screaming and crying and laughing just at myself

(Chorus)
Why is it so hard
to live a life like this?
Forgetting the past,
the days that feel like years
You were the light that brought me to top
But now you are gone and my life just stopped
(You were the light that brought me to top
But now you are gone and my life just stopped… )

(Bridge)
Please, don’t make me feel like that
I just want you to come back…

(Chorus)
Why is it so hard
to live a life like this?
Forgetting the past,
the days that feel like years
You were the light that brought me to top
But now you are gone and my life just…


#2

:heart_eyes: beautiful words - great deepness - I get exactly how it feels - very nice share @lpaniist


#3

These are great lyrics! I was already hearing a rhythmn as I was reading


#4

Yes, I was hearing the rhythm while writing it :grinning:


#5

This is so deep and meaningful, sometimes I feel like the things you guys write on here should be published. :laughing: :grin:


#6

Thank you for the kind words :pray: :heart:@theearlywalker @rickvanmeijel @chigokurosaki


#7

@lpaniist

WoW

All I say is change the title where you put by me and put By LPAniist gives the song ownership

Be proud of your song and I say this
I was able to read, no, sing this to myself it flowed that well and the message is clear cut and well wrote

Well Done


#8

@lpaniist please check out the forums Lyric Band The Unity of Us and other lyricist such as myself (I have LOADS on this forum haha) also 1 month into my 365 lyric challenge (I song for everyday)

But not just me, many of us have lyrics check them out and feel inspired :blush:


#9

This really good as @acemasters said this a great poem I really enjoyed reading it so thanks for sharing


#10

So beautiful and to touching i love it so much.